evaluation of rough cut 2

I think that there's still a lot of work to be done with our title sequence. We need to change the colour and font of our title credits so that they match the shots. We are going to work more on the title of our film and how it appears to make it more interesting. Also, I think that we should get rid off the shots of the little girl as they tell away too much. The audience would know too much about the film at the beginning and could then expect what's going to happen. Our title sequence is meant to be discrete and those shots of the girl begin to tell a story. I think that during our next lesson after we finish with all the corrections above, we are going to work on the sound more. Sound is very important especially in horror films as it builds tension, so we will work on sound layering. So we will add sound effects of swings squeaking etc.