My 1st health check feedback - that is soon to be improved!

This is my 1st health check feedback. It is currently a D. To boost my grade up i need to;
-Go though my current blogs and add more detal/finish small areas.
-I need to post using more technology .. prezi.. emaze.. youtube videos..
-Re-do the micro/macro bog 14 in more detail, watching spelling, showing deeper analysis and using technology( ablest add images)
- I will also use much more technology when i blog so that my marks go up.